very well written and thought out it shows the emotional and physical side of of a master slave relation I am not a writer my self but I feel certain that if you so wanted you could make a job of writing such stories the fear you wrote of speaks much the the predicament that the submissive wants and feels the need to be put in I like the whole making her take her panties off in public thought it was a fitting punishment to taking his time in fact it is a punishment I myself had made a former sub do you must have had much experience in a dominant role in your own personal life or at lest taken much time to think out your process i would like to see you continue this story I think a part 2 would be welcomed greatly by many
sincerely
Asher Slade